AN: The Fault In Our Part

The Fault In Our Part is about a young College Girl named Louise and her misconceptions and indecission induced by her fangirling hobby that led her to something she didn't expect.

The Fault In Our Part. I write this in the summer of 2016 after I graduated from college hoping to find a stable career in literature. Of course I didn't make it through the publishing and I start rethinking about the fallacies in this context. The shallow story and lack of certainty between the character and the character definitions was obvious because I focused on Phenomenology aspects of thinking, as every simple minded does, in every decisions of every character in the story. As for example when Louise was continously denying her doubts about the truthfulness of Julius in the Hallway scene during the end of Mid-terms that she dismissed his melancholic appearance to mid-term exam stress even though hearing Julius' friend Ben talking to someone about his 'other girl' prior to the event. This thinking was caused primarily of Louise idea of perfection influenced by her hobby as KPOP fangirl, that there was no wrong in 'good side'. Her misconceptions lead her to a series of melancholical demise after realization about the fact, nevertheles (as every book does) she went up to conquer and appreciate what was everything a thing was made of with the help of her father guidance.
This was the first novel I finished above from about thirty unfinished story. I just added a few hints in this novel about the 'other' unfinished stories and their character. Angelique David story was another thing, and also the story behind why she denied Julius' courtship. Also beside from Angel, the guy whom Ben was conversing to in the canteen scene when Louise and Micah heard about the 'other girl'. There are about five characters who appeared in this novel who had their story written in an unfinished business.
Though above from such, I was moving towards writing the future of the world where Louise lives.

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